Matrix Dragon
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We have that in the show. It's called Mantleinventing a new nation just so Atlas could be fascist towards it. (Not hyperbole, the author explicitly namedrops fascism.)
We have that in the show. It's called Mantleinventing a new nation just so Atlas could be fascist towards it. (Not hyperbole, the author explicitly namedrops fascism.)
Why should I? It's a waste of time. Even if this person has good ideas it's not like their version of RWBY is ever going to be made, and even if it was made it would run into the exact same issues of lack of resources and difficulty with managing said resources and making that deadlines that would force compromises that has affected the quality of the actual show.Believe or not, there’s a rewrite that’s not a middle finger to CRWBY. It’s actually interesting, give it a try. It does, however, has spelling and grammar errors.
In the words of Eddy Rivas: "Yes. I too would love an infinite budget."Why should I? It's a waste of time. Even if this person has good ideas it's not like their version of RWBY is ever going to be made, and even if it was made it would run into the exact same issues of lack of resources and difficulty with managing said resources and making that deadlines that would force compromises that has affected the quality of the actual show.
Even when we first got to know Atlas we had Penny being forbidden from talking to anyone or making any friends and lines like:In the words of Eddy Rivas: "Yes. I too would love an infinite budget."
(It's almost like that's the reason RWBY doesn't have plot-stall episodes...)
Edit: Also, from a brief reread, that rewrite complains that Atlas was initially portrayed as "good" but later as "evil". No, not at all—we got Atlas PR from Atlas themselves early in the story, and that PR ends up in a different light when we learn more about Atlas. It's entirely consistent, just that it's not as clear-cut as "Atlas says Atlas is great, therefore Atlas is great!"
Which really is at the root of a lot of RWBY "critique"—taking the most shallow first impression of something, then complaining when the story doesn't match that initial impression, even if the story has built up the truth of a manner as being quite the opposite of what such folks initially assumed.
Even when we first got to know Atlas we had Penny being forbidden from talking to anyone or making any friends and lines like:
"They have done a fine job! Would you agree? Wouldn't you agree? But fine? Well in Atlas fine just isn't good enough."
Followed by the shiny new Atlesian Knight 200 models literally kicking down the old Atlesian Knight 130 models that are built to resemble humans. Even if they're just machines there's something unsettling about the callous attitude on display there. The way the old is treated like trash simply for no longer being as shiny and fancy as the hot new thing and how it's not just enjoy to replace the old but instead it has to be kicked to the curb.
It was a bit of a red flag moment. Not to mention the SDC, Ironwood backstabbing Ozpin, and the upper class twits in volume 4 along with Ironwood displaying some very worrying tendencies.
"I just realized that Blake in Vol 2 could have been a version of Vol 7-8 Ironwood. Both characters where hyper focused on something, both where carrying some guilt, and both where running on very little sleep to the point where they where ignoring everything else except their goals. The difference is that Yang took Blake to the side and talked some sence into her while Ironwood didn't have anyone who did that. Hell, a fanfic I read had Qrow fake attack Ironwood, and then point out how if he was 100%, Ironwood would have had a gun to his head instead of just standing their. Honestly, this is less of a critique and more of a realization that Vol 2 Blake was on a similar path that Ironwood was in the Atlas Arc."
Oooh nice comparison.from tokufan400 over on tumblr
Being devoured by something that could not give two shits about him or his idiotic opinions on humanity and Batman would be the only funny thing he's ever done.Look, if the Grimm eating the Joker is wrong, I don't wanna be right!
The tragedy sapped the color from his clothes XD
I'm pretty sure they had Yang right out of the academy for Raven to be the right age for Maidenhood after leaving.I mean, I think Tai became a teacher around the time Yang came into his life.
Teaching would be a more steady income and a LOT less risk. Meanwhile he had Qrow and Summer to help every now and then.
The beautiful thing about any "critic" rewriter talking about their thought process (or their whining about the show in general) is that it truly highlights how none of them understand the point of anything in RWBY, or how stories work at all.ok so, a few days ago I recall passing by a Syto post where he talks about how the faunus in his rewrite have more than 1 animal trait.
his reason? he feels it's to limiting in regards to design or something.
he even tries to bring up how Sienna's stripes are tattoos and not actual tiger stripes and that in his redesign he gave her a weaponized tail.
and I just can't help but think to myself "this just proves he doesn't understand design" among other stuff.
- When it comes to beast-folk of various media you either have the Ears&Tail combo, like Fran and the Black Cat race in "Reincarnated as a Sword", or the Full Fluff, like Catra in SPOP. RWBY's brand of "beast-folk" with the faunus stands out BECAUSE of the 1 trait rule.
- The "limiting" comment, well maybe that is part of the point? It makes a designer have to think about what they want a certain faunus to look like. Not to mention it helps each one stand out. Blake and Neon are both cats, but a different part helps them stand out, for example.
- For Sienna, if we stick with the 1 trait rule (her having the ears) then her having tattoos could actually be a personal statement to the world. It could be her saying "I am a tiger faunus and PROUD to be one.", so just making the stripes just one of many animal traits she has takes away from the silent message.
- Having faunus just have 1 trait could very well of also been a design choice to show that they are still very much human as apposed to being typical furry bait that goes "Nyaa".
I think you outline your pointsd here extremely well!ok so, a few days ago I recall passing by a Syto post where he talks about how the faunus in his rewrite have more than 1 animal trait.