Deconstructing RWBY Rewrites and Fix-Fics

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In this RWBY story by UGX7 (with assistance from a few other writers at times), the story starts four months after the finale of Volume 3, with Team RNJR on their way to Haven due to the fact that the members of Team RWBY has been broken up and scattered due to the fallout of the aforementioned Volume. While the members of Teams RWBY and JN - R deal with their individual problems separately from each other, the hands of Salem and by extension, Cinder Fall have not been idle as their faction has already put into action their plans to destroy the Kingdoms as well as all those who oppose them. While Cinder has a surprise ready and waiting to be unleashed against Team RNJR, someone from Cinder's past returns and may just set into motion events that would have serious consequences for both Team RWBY and JNPR and decide the destiny of the world of Remnant...

This story then becomes an example of a Fix Fic in which the author UGX7 has written in response to the well-known ending of Volume 3, especially with Pyrrha's death and the handling of several other characters story arcs. Not only does the fic focuses on the many canon characters in the RWBY universe, it also offers an in-depth look at the overarching RWBY universe, and creates numerous Original Characters (OCs) to populate the various factions and organizations that were mentioned in the fanfiction. While there are quite a number of OCs (with quite a few of them getting their own individual subplots), the canon characters still have their chance to shine in their moments of glory by taking more proactive responses to the events and relationships already established by the canon of the first three RWBY Volumes, and their actions might just fundamentally change the post-Volume 3 setting since quite a number of hints and mentions of something big yet to arrive are hidden within the chapters themselves.
The title’s self-explanatory; this thread will why this story might be overrated and its author’s beef about Pyrrha’s death.
 

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Jaune Arc: Dark Avenger

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The boarders overrun, the castle's death knell, atop the tower where the Maiden fell. The Ring is fractured, the warriors scattered, the Knight who loved her; his soul now shattered. Self-loathing and penance, his pain is endless, now in his hand wields the sword of vengeance. The hunt has begun, by the Moon and Sun, he will resist and bite, until it is done.

A rewrite of RWBY from V4 onward, containing extensive world-building, retooling and restoring of lore, and re-imagining the story overall, focusing on Jaune Arc seeking revenge for the murder of his love, Pyrrha Nikos.
 

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The Tale of a Cat Most Curious and Remnant Timeline.

Take everything listed here for a grain of salt:

A Lighter Shade Of Black:
The Tale Of A Cat Most Curious (link ): The Curious Cat is portrayed by the author as the least despicable and most sympathetic main character from RWBY Volume 9, short of Little, and they're in opposition to RWBY/J and Neopolitan in this "vent fic." Despite the Cat's bitter feelings toward humans and ruthlessness in pursuing their goals, they have a much lower body count than Neo or RWBY/J do after the Fall of Atlas. The Cat's tragic backstory and lack of agency over their madness and desperation are pointed out and played for pathos, as is the fact they aren't actively threatening the Ever After or Remnant at large. Neopolitan pointedly has more moral agency over her evil actions and a much less compelling excuse than the Cat. Yet, she's more needlessly vicious and callous than them when endangering Atlas-Mantle and the Ever After and when torturing Ruby. RWBY/J are characterized as delusional, hypocritical, self-absorbed, and petty knights templar who accelerated James Ironwood's sanity slippage at the worst possible time for Atlas-Mantle, creating an even worse situation at the end of the Atlas arc than if they'd done nothing, have caused far more harm than they've prevented in the war against Salem on Remnant, and are liable to keep doing the same things to the rest of Remnant if they ever make it back out of the Ever After because most of them are more or less incapable of acknowledging that they were ever in the wrong and internalizing anything from their mistakes.

Anti-Villain: Downplayed by the Curious Cat. They're an embittered, ruthless desperate, self-serving entity willing to turn to psychological manipulation and murder if it helps them, and they despise humans due to their bad experiences involving Alyx, Lewis, and Jaune Arc. However, many of the Cat's unintentionally sympathetic traits and redeeming qualities from their canon portrayal are highlighted or confirmed in this fic. The Cat has tragic and traumatic reasons which they have almost no agency over for turning into what they are now, they have some internal regrets over murdering Alyx (an act they committed in a blind rage which afterward traumatized them), and they don't seriously harm or kill non-Remnantians if it doesn't get them closer to their goals. While the Cat is sadistic towards Remnantians due to the Remnantian-shaped chip on their shoulder, the Cat holds no ill will towards the other Afterans and won't hurt or endanger any of them very lightly. The Cat isn't disrupting either Remnant or the Ever After at large — in fact, the Cat is aware that their causing the end of Team RWBY in pursuit of their host might incidentally save Remnant's inhabitants from even more Fall of Atlas-esque catastrophes.

Knight Templar: RWBY/J see themselves as heroes doing what's right and trying to save the world, but this portrayal takes their most criticized and unintentionally unsympathetic traits and actions from the show, and it runs with them. In truth, RWBY/J are incredibly destructive, self-absorbed, delusional, hypocritical, and petty manchildren who have created far more problems than they've solved in the war against Salem, are callous to others and even each other at times, and most of them avoid acknowledging, much less internalizing, their mistakes like the plague. RWBY/J functions as the antagonist to the Curious Cat's protagonist.

Villain Protagonist: The Curious Cat, the final main antagonist of RWBY Volume 9, is the protagonist. They never redeem themself, but they're depicted as A Lighter Shade of Black compared to Neopolitan and RWBY/J.

Obfuscating Stupidity: The Curious Cat isn't as distractible as they appear to be. At the Garden, they deliberately feign getting distracted by a flower when they're supposed to be gathering ingredients for the Growgurt Parfait, so that Ruby's teammates, seeing this, will accompany the Cat and aim to keep them on track instead of staying with Ruby, making Ruby feel even more neglected by her teammates.
 
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